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There are different opinions among people as to cars,some people agree that cars is very convenient,comfortable mean of transportation.Reflect national living conditions improve,the prosperity of the country.Drive other industry development. Opposition people thinks about cars is bad,first air pollution is serious.The second air pollution is too much of traffic thing.The thrid stop cars is big problem in life.That cars promble is bad or good.