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文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
I am so happy that you come my hometown and I can not waiting see you again. Last month I leaved you country, I missed many place to go, It is so shamed. At this time, some places we will go. Zunyi is a city of Guizhou province, it is has many story in it. Do you know the meet of ZunYi? seventy years ago,they took a big acident. So, the place i loved most. Moreover, the most interesting is ZunYi park, althought every city has park, but i believe it is a special space, they are many vary of flowers, birds. Because they are not belong to park. if you are hungry , they are something famous food of the city you can select. Pepole in here, who has warm heated, as you need help, they will give hands to you. Dear friend ,come on! I can not waiting for you, You are my best.
