2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping With the development of the economy,the Online Shopping is become more and more popular in our daily life.However,as a saying goes'every coins has two side',so does the Internet.Shoping on the Internet shows many advantages in front of us.First of all,it can lead us into a colourful Internet wolrd,and give us very king of things to choice.Second,The price of most things on the Internet is cheaper than the price in the supermaket.However,when we are shopping on the Internet,we shouldn't ingore it's disadvantages,the false infornation that are given by the owner and so on. As far as i'm concerned,althougth Online Shopping is a tendency in this modern society,we should keep our eyes clearly,and we shouldn't be addicted in the Online Shopping,or it can make us develop an uncorrect thinking about this.