2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear my friend I am glad to hear that you will visit my hometown.So let me be your guaid and I'd like to show you the most interesting place.As you know,Beijing has the Great wall,but my hometown also have the Great wall ,named jiangnan great wall. When the spring festival is coming,it's traiditional for people to climb the jiangnan great wall .If you shand inthe top of the wall,and make a deep breath,you can really relax yourself.Besides,you can admir the beautiful flowers and has a good view to look my hometown.In addition,there are many delicious food at the foot of the jiangnan great wall such as noodles.