作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Li Lie is my best friend.He is very kind of everyone.He always help others who is in trouble.He is an outgoing boy.He has many hobbies,such as playing basketball,swimming,singing and so on. Li Lei is good at learning.He usually gets good grades.When I have some problems in studying,he always help me to work out the problems. He is very friendly for me.So I want to give him a gift for expressing my thanks.I hope he will get into a good high school and happy everyday.