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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;多多加强句法知识;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;副词使用偏多。

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Just as the saying goes :"seeing is believing",that is to say,believe what you have saw .however,it is stupidly that a person who making a conduct immediately when he or she saw something.there are sever examples : firstly,a coin have two sides,so,what we eyes witnessed only one aspect of it,besides,what actually important nature often behinds its surface ,we need make efforts to dig it out! secondly,it is not easy thing that make a discreet decision ,in generally ,if we have aspire to do something well ,it needs not only our hands ,but also minds as well.so,before taking actions thinking twice again. last but not least ,except for talents ,most of us haven't a rapidly respond head, besides,It is no use crying over spilt milk,therefore,take carefully and canny ,there is a popular proverb :"where there is a minds ,there is success"

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