作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章用词太过单一,注意少数拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
It is not true for you to make a conclusion when you see something or when you heart something.What you see may be is not all reality,but you believe what you see.Obveiely,you are not intelligent. First of all,you can remember what you know.At the same time,you should analyed these.Only in that way,can you make a true conclusion.
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