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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17600
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分61.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;句式灵活多变,但文中句子错误偏多了;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Apology Dear Momo, I am so sorry that i can't make this trip down the Yangtzi River this summer with you, because i have to care for my grandmother who has suffered from chronic illness recently. I told you that my grandmother who took responsibility, of raising me when my parents were busy on their affairs, is my beloved person in the world, i should to spare my every effort to make sure her health and happiness. I really sorry to break a promise and wish that you can think on my position and understand me. Yours sincerely Susan

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