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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17600
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分61.5分
评语:

文中使用了不错的从句,但需注意个别错误句子;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Dear Momo, I am very depressed recently for my grandmother suddenly suffered from acute illness., so i must accompany her when she is pianful now. It is a pity to give up this excitng trip down the Yangtzi River this summer, but unfortunately, i must do this, as i should reciprocate the love and regard she given me. when my parents were busy on their affairs and have no time to care for me, my grandmother took responsibility to foster me, so i want to do something for her and make sure her recovering. I really sorry about not being able to travle with you and wish that you can put youself in placeand understand me. Yours sincerely Susan

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