托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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Apology Dear Momo, I am very depressed recently for my grandmother suddenly suffered from acute sickness. , so I must accompany her when she is going through pain now. It is a pity to give up this amazing trip down the Yangtzi River this summer, but unfortunately, i must do this, as i should reciprocate the love and regard she given me. when my parents were busy on their affairs and had no time to have care for me, my grandmother took a responsibility of fostering me with her heart and soul, so i want to do something for her and make sure her recovering. I really sorry about not being able to travel with you and wish that you can put yourself in place and understand me. Yours sincerely Susan