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How I Finance My College Education? Nowdays,go to college need spend a lot of money,this is a ordinary question that we all must to face.How to solve this question?Different person has different method.In my opinion,there are some of methods to follow.The first method is asking money from our parents,most of us obtain money all by this approach.The second method is taking part-time by ourselves during the rest time.The third method we get money by appling the scholarship,but this method is fit for the people who the archivment of every subject is good.How I Finance My College Education? Generally,My parents will give a part of money to me,the rest I pay it by taking part-time,sometimes to apply the scholarship,too.