2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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my name is xiao qiang,my penpal whose name is john will come to my hometown. as a guide for him ,i would like to show him around my home town. the first place to go is nanhu park. the park is so big and beautiful,we can play many entertainment thing in it. of course,we can also enjoy the bituful sense