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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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作者词汇量积累不错,学术词汇积累较少;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

English language possesses a saying'Don't judge a book by its cover.'It is used to tell us that what matters most is one's inner beauty rather than look.However,nowadays some people not only women but also men are desperate to make them more beautiful though it may be expensive.In the process,inner beauty is ignored. As we all know,Jack Ma used to be CEO of the Chinese e-commerce giant,Alibaba.With his talent for creating and management,he became a legendary man in China,for he found Alibaba,a successful company which grows stronger and stronger.But to be honest,he doesn't have a handsome appearance.Some even consider him ugly.Just as he once said,"He can't match Beckham in appearance,but they both have a group of women supporting them."Although he isn't endowed with a good look,he is extremely popular and becomes an example to many young men. Jack Ma's inner beauty is his creative ideas and untiring efforts,and nobody mind his look.So we are expected to show inner things to others to earn real respect.

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