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字数:300 满分:100分
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Money spending is just like water flowing.I was born and raised in a small and remote country.But I went to Shanghai to go to university.It is a persperous city with high consumption level.I feel like crying because of my poor allowance.Who can help me?None.So I looked for part-time job,being a waitress,a tuitor.