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the most interesting place i come from guizhou .in my eyes guizhou is a very beautiful place.there have many different culture.people are kinds of everone.so i want to take you to see my hometown. there have many trees,and very green.if you get there you can breath frish air . and there have many interesting place,such as huangguoshu longgong and so on.i think if you come here ,you can love here.