学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;作者句法基础较为扎实;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
A phenomenon shown in the English education is that spelling is not being paid sufficient attention which seems odd with the fever of learning English nowadays.The rush for quick results which Chinese education is intending is on the cards,which was exhibited by how schools put a high value on the point rather than the part unshown in text however essentially in study.Naturally,unscientific method like this which had been popularized lead to little attention on studying useless section in examination,that is,spelling.To make an alteration,I deem it advisable to get the purpose of study back to its original place,where every progress of study still matters.