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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Boys and girls. May I have your attention,please? Different people have different opinions about watching TV. I think television is the most important and useful inventions in the world. It is more convenient for us to get information from TV, for example,we can learn about what is going on in the world by watching the news on TV, in addition, we can increase our knowledge and widen our eyes by watching the programs such as the world geography, the animal world, something about the law and so on. Also it is a good way for people to relax when we are tired from work. But everything has two sides, watching TV too much can cause a lot of problems, it not only has a terrible influence on our eyes --- eyesight,but also can get in the way of our study. So in a word, we should make good use of the television. only in this way can television be the best and closest friends in our daily lives.
