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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇使用较丰富，但学术词汇使用太少；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
My teachers and Me We always say parents are the children's first teachers. But I think the teachers are the most important person in children's lives. They try their best not only to teach us knowledge but also how to be a good, useful and valuable person. Sometimes they are our best and closest friends as they are ready to help us solve the problems when we are in trouble. Here is a story about my teacher and me. On a cold winter day, I caught a cold because of wearing so few clothes. I had a fever and vomitted almost everything I had during the day in the mid-nigh, I felt like I was being dead. Just then, my headmaster came in and immediately called the car and took me to the hospital. She even didn't go to sleep,although the doctor told her there was nothing wrong with me. She accomapied me the whole night. How moved I was. I just couldn't helping crying. I will never forget her.
