小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best friend,who can help me a lot in many ways in my life.His name is Tony.We are classmates in the Class three Grade one.He is very outgoing and smart.He is less tall than me.He always wears the black glasses which seem very cool and very precious.So I always thought he is very rich.He studied hard,and he is always the first in our class.He gets on well wth each classmate.He is my best friend.