高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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I am a enthusiast.A sport that is two team on playground，each team with a ball. I am loving football by a chance. on the my home way，i got a football and hang out with my friends ，therefrom， i am a big fan of football. and then i often train and race with my classmate together.David Beckham it is my favorite soccer player， i wish to make a professional football player.