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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了一些简单的从句；文中拼写错误比较多，用词也稍显贫乏；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
The Internet on Learning As the social developing,the internet is become the part of the people's life.Moreover the internet on learning is very porpuler in our life. In my opinion,I think is a good idear to learning on the internet.Because we will free on the internet.we can use our freetime to learning.And the internet have the number of information and knowladge,we can choose information for our need.And the infoemation is don't need to pay for money.I think this is very good thing to learning on the internet.
