十一期间(National Holiday),你的同学晓璐邀请你到他家乡做客。你受到了他们一家人的热情款待,并且参观了很多漂亮的名胜古迹。请写一封感谢信给你的同学,主要包括如下内容:
1.感谢同学的热情邀请;
2.对他及家人的热情款待表示感激;
3.表达他家乡的美景给你留下了深刻的印象;
4.再次感谢他们一家人,并真诚地邀请你的同学到你家里做客。
【精析】这是一封威谢信。首先要注意信的格式,而且需将题目要求的四项内容一一列出,内容并不复杂,可以不使用完整的句子。其次要尽量表达出自己的感谢之情。
文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
dear classmate, Im so glad to write to you.How is it going? Firstly,i want to impress my thanks for people who provide me with this good travel. Secondely,i really enjoy you hot-heart invitation.your family are so king to me.they gave me so many delicious foods,drinks and so on.The beautiful views in your hometown has impressed me deeply. In a word,there are so much thanks i wang to tell you .