文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
My best friend,who can help me a lot in many ways in my life.His name is Tony.We are classmates in the Class three Grade one.He is very outgoing and smart.He is less tall than me.He always wears the black glasses which seem very cool and very precious.So I always thought he is very rich.He studied hard,and he is always the first in our class.He gets on well with each pupil.He is my best friend.