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How to Succeed in a Job Interview? Take a interview is a approach which to get a job for most of us.But not everyone knows its effect in appling a job.A succeeful interview not only can help us to get a job,but also can make you learn more knowledge which can't learn from the school.So,taking a interview is important for us.How to succeed in a job interview is a very important topic that is everybody care for.In my opinion,if you want to succeed in a job interview,you must follow below points.First,you need know the company which you applied for.Second,arrive at the company on time.Third,pay attention to your wearing and the method of your reponse the questions.