2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

有效的运用了一些复杂句；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

The way to success Success which can convey achievement and confidence is an experience that each person want to obtain it.However, success can not be so easy to achieve and need a great quantity of factors in the process.Indeed, success without experence so many trouble and difficults can not achieve pleasure extensively. In may opinion, to one's begain,the most significant to success is persisit.If one want to obtain it , it's need a large number of experiment and trial.Perhapes, It can not even impossible be so easy to reach.From another sides, keeping a optimistic mind is also important to every one.Don't pride exceesvely after you obtain once success and treat it as an encouragement to your next success.If we don't success through this trial,don't lost you condidence and treat it as a treasure in you experiences.