2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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The way to success Success which can convey achievement and confidence is an experience that each person tend to obtain it.However, success can not be so easy to attain which need a great quantity of factors in the process.Indeed, success without experience so many trouble and difficulties can not achieve delight extensively. In may opinion, to one's begain,the most significant to success is persisit.If one want to obtain it , it's need a large number of experiment and trial.Perhapes, It can not even impossible be so easy to reach.From another sides, keeping a optimistic mind is also important to every one.Don't pride exceesvely after you obtain once success and treat it as an encouragement to your next success.If we don't success through this trial,don't lost you condidence and treat it as a treasure in you experiences.