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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:2998
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

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学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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The way to success Success which can convey achievement and confidence is an experience that each person tend to obtain it.However, success can not be so easy to attain which need a great quantity of factors in the process.Indeed, success without through so many trouble and difficulties can not achieve delight extensively. In may view, to one's begin,the most significant to success is persist.If one want to obtain it, it's need a marvelous number of experiment and trial.Perhapes, It can impossible not even be so easy to reach.From another side, keeping a optimistic mind is also important to every one.Don't pride excessively after you obtain once success and treat it as an encouragement to your next success.If we don't success through this trial,don't lost you confidence and treat it as a treasure in you experiences.

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