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2001年6月英语四级作文真题:给同学写关于度假的信件

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:43浏览次数:1411
要求:
 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the weeklong holiday. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions (given in Chinese) below:
  1.表示欢迎
  2.提出度假安排建议
  3.提醒应注意的事项
  A Letter to A Schoolmate; June 23, 2001; Dear Xiao Wang; Yours, Zhang Ying
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Dear,Xiao Wang I'm very glad to receive this letter from you,in letter you said you will visit me during the week long holiday,this message let me exited,there was some years we were haven't meet each other since we had graduated from the school.I missed you very much,welcome you to visit me.For this visit ,I have some suggestions.How do you think? First day,I will take you to visit my workplace.Second day,you can with me take part in our school's celebration during the long holiday,there are lots of programs will be performed in celebration.The last day,we can go to play basketball together,above is my plan for your this visit.At last,pay attention to your journey. Look forward to your letter! yours sincerely, Zhang Ying June 23,2001

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