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A Beautiful City In China Im so glad to introduce a place which is one of the most beautiful site in our hometown.Firstly,the site i will introduce to you is not far from my house.We call it Huatianjiudi.There are so many different kinds of flowers.Blue,yellow,green and red colours.We should not pay any money,just 20yuan.In fact,if you take your schoolcard,you only pay 10 yuan.Especially on some good days.Such as:Happy Saint Valentilences Day,National Day.There are so many kinds of delicious foods.For exemple,Salad,cakes,noodles and many cool drinkings.Everything is quite cheap.