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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:1998
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分85.0分
评语:

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;作者在句法层面做的很棒;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

As we can see,the form above apparently mirrors an increasingly common social phenomenon in China---the population of tourists is becoming bigger and bigger as time goes by. We can know that in this city more and more people choose to travel in recent ten years.The number of tourists in 1995 was ten thousand,and by 2000,it was almost forty thousand,By the time of 2005,it increased to more than 120000.Hence,we can inferred two reasons for this phenomenon. The first and perhaps most essential is that people's life is becoming better and better.Since the revolution in 1978,Chinese economy has experienced a high-light,which contributes to people's good life.Therefore,people have money to go on travels.The other reason is that people have changed their views to life.In the old society,people were so conservative that they didn't even have the desire to have a look at what the outside world looked like.Nevertheless,as time flew little by little,the technology broadens our horizons,and countries in the world cooperated with one another a lot more than usual,Chinese people have the chance to get touch to alien cultural.Thereby,we long to know more about other countries,then,we choose to travel. In my opinion,it is a good phenomenon to see people go to travel,by doing which we can make sure that China is developing,people are contended with their country.Only in this way will we find that China still have a long way to catch up the developed countries.

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