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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10403
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分64.0分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

As the old saying that it is inadvisiable to put all eggs in one basket. The truly fact is meant that we should not invest all of our capital in on a bussiness or use up competely energetic on a things. Firstly, as for us, when we try our best to prepare an interview we should think if it fail and how to do. It is unwise to prepare for just a company. The acts is shown the development of our country. Durig the ten year poverty times, nattive leader do in this way. In whole country , the first step is improve the economic conditon where located in near city. From no, The GDP number to some extend is prove that it is correct. Last but not the least, we should learn how to do all thing in the wisom. Only in this way, can we conquer any tankle effitively.

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