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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1895
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
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作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Don't be afraid to say "no" Had you watched the idol drama that Fated to love you? The heroine is a girl that doesn’t be afraid to say “no”. In fact, you can meet that a number of person don’t be afraid to say “no” in our life. “You can’t do it when one guy want you to help him to do something, but you can’t refuse.” “I can’t refuse when someone want me to do something. I know that I don’t want to do it, but I have to do it.” “One stranger want me to do that I don’t want to do, but I don’t know how I refuse.” And so on. How do you say “no”? First, simple reply. Second, don’t directly say “no”. For example, “I am sorry, this time……” or “I am try to ask my friend whether can help to you,” Third, don’t be ashamed that you refuse to their requirement. You know, you are refused when you want somebody to help you too. This is a usually thing. I hope you like the heroine of the idol drama. In the end, the heroine changes a self-confidence girl.

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