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假设你是某公司销售助理王海，请给David Smith先生写一封回信，内容包括：
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫；
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运，并列举纸箱的优点；你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱，效果很好；
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Dear David Smith
希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是学术词汇的积累；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；全文结构较为严谨；请注意分段。
Like all the others,I live to conquer life.I have benn in this fight with my own love ,hate,happiness and sorrow always.But I haven't lose my faith to life.Neither will my life ended nor will I know what would happen and wait for me.However,I know a little about the future because the past,not a silent mute,will tell us something.
