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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Spring of College Shelley said that if winter comes can spring be far behind. From it we can know that spring is the sunny, worm and lovely season.I love spring,i love spring of my college more! Spring came to my college, we can see the sprouts of willows are coming up,the glasses and leaves are green and dance in the breeze.The flower are coming up, the college are full of colorful flowers.Yellow canola flower,White Pear,Pink peach and so on. Beautiful as a picture. We can smell the fresh scents of spring,Sweet flowers scents filled the air attracting swarms of bees.People often say that rain precious as oil.After a spring rain,not only the landscape a new look,but the air. We can smell the fragrance of the soil and the joy of planting.We can also hear a lot of bird singing in the tree and wind kissing the leave. Spring is a concert, We can hear the voice of the nature. Of course we also can hear the voice of students. We can hear classmate's laughter and sound of reading aloud. Spring is a season which prepares us to do our work. We all know the saying that the planed for years should be made in the spring and we should make full use of our time to prepare for the whole year. In the beautiful college we should use our best time to do wonderful thing!
