文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Some classmates suggest buying the school some gifts.It can express our thanks to our school and out teacher.The other classmates give some advice to spend our money in buying some study stationery for the children in the poor and the disaster areas. In my opinion,we need to make some cards to our teachers.Besides,we can hold a party for our teacher. The time flies so fast.The middle school life will be finished soon.I think I will never forget my middle school life.