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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11363
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Compared with the precious.Especially in recent years,mobile phones are more and more popular,no matter among the wrinkly or the young people,all of them can't bear to part with it.That must have many people wonder what leads of it,the fallowing will explain. At the begining,the most important reason is the development of thesmartphone,people not only can use it give somebody a call but can do many things with it,for example we can use it buy goods online,browse web page which useful,we also can use play the games ant chat with friends or relatives and so on,the second,mobiles are more convenient than comeputers,but it have many functions what computers's have.the last but not least,when people tired they can use it download music or picture.It is the amusement of the mobile phone. In reality we should use the mobile phone suitably,we would better not overusing it

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