作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇,不过拼写错误比较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
With the development of secience technology,there is an increasing number eletronic books.As the coins have both two sides,the opinons of eletronic books vary to person to person. A lot of people attach great importance to eletronic books,thinking that traditional books could be replaced by them,which could bring human more convience. For instance,compared with the traditional books,the eletronic books can save more resource to some extent.In addition,electronic books are lighter and thinner than the traditional one.That is why some peopke has the thought of replacing. From the point of my view,the trditional books should be valued and cherished,but not being replaced.As a typical way of knowledge learning,tradional books have been forming unique statue,which could do a lot of good to reading,Therefore,it can not be replaced by eletronic books.