2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Wellcome to my home As a Chinese I am very pround,If you come to my hometown ,you will find,that is a fancy travel. I was born in the south of China,that is Guangdong.Where's economic very fast as you take plan,in here ,you will fell the symboll of the GUangzhou Tower,it