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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9045
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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meanings of life I was born in small city,when i was young i hope i can writted a few housework or nothing ,and i can had a many many time to play or eat,at the time this is so greatest use of life.With the years spend,i am 22-years old now ,i want to realize my dream , help any needs help people ,don't waste of time and company with my perents is meaningful thing .Why i have thinkinng ?Because i had been spend may time to sleeping,eatting and piaying have noting plan to do anything ,it made me so boring.So i started intend to plan my dream .Company my parents is comes to my compus life ,because i have many times in my study ,stand in they side is very very lacking,i'm so embarressed .

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