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meanings of life I was born in small city,when i was young i hope i can writted a few housework or nothing ,and i can had a many many time to play or eat,at the time this is so greatest use of life.With the years spend,i am 22-years old now ,i want to realize my dream , help any needs help people ,don't waste of time and company with my perents is meaningful thing .Why i have thinkinng ?Because i had been spend may time to sleeping,eatting and piaying have noting plan to do anything ,it made me so boring.So i started intend to plan my dream .Company my parents is comes to my compus life ,because i have many times in my study ,stand in they side is very very lacking,i'm so embarressed .