文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Hi,Rose I'm very glad to receive this letter from you,in letter ,you told me that you will to visit my hometown,it made me very exciting.we haven't see each other since three year ago.I miss you very much.I cann't wait to see you again.I have made a plan for your this journey.My hometown is the capital of HuNan province,Changsha which a city is located in central south of China.There are many interesting places and lots of good foods in here.First of all,I will take you to visit the academy of YueLU, and then we go to climb the YueLu mountain.After climbing mountain,I will take you go to the HuoGONG palace,a place famous with its cate.Above all is I preper for your this journey. I look forward to your letter sincerely yours inman