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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中词汇丰富度要提高，也能较好的使用学术词汇；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
from: hubin@163.com data:dec 25 To: KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject: establish business relationship I know your new produce of N0.5760 from exhibition held in NewYork date on Dec.15 to 22,i am very interesting in it. please sent us a price list and an instruction. Thanks for your coperation, wish we establish business relationship. I am very glad to wait you reply sincerely yours Hubin
