2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I had a 3days' trip back to Hangzhou.I call it as "Yesterday once more".This is the greatest time I never had after I left Hangzhou.Some people keep asking me what is special here.You would not know if you have not been in Hangzhou.This is the city you can have a life,not only living.You will totally relax yourself,Riding a bike around west lake,visiting a free museum....... There is no rush.The impressive sence is the elders sing hangzhou local opera at the west lake front,so peaceful..... Hangzhou people will spend an hour waiting for a table at GREEN TEA, Nobody will care about time,We care about how you feel. Hangzhou-the most beautiful city in China If you have a couple of friends who can go out with you during the weekend,Hangzhou will be your heaven.