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2009年9月英语六级作文真题:名字的重要性

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:37浏览次数:1772
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题目 On the Importance of a Name
要求
1.有人认为名字(名称)不重要;
2.有人认为非常重要;
3.你认为呢?
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
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适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

A lot of people attach great importance to their names and titles,thinking that they could bring them luck and opportunity.They pay much attention to their names and titles,which including produts,ognization and so on.Furthermore,they even invinted ''expert'' in that field to do that for them. However,others point out that name or title has nothing to do with luck and oppotunity.They believe that it is the effort what they make that can contribute to success.And the name or title is not decisive factor. From the point of my view, I prefer the later one.A corret view about name and title should be formed and valued.First of all, a good name or title can help to convey a good image to some extent.Secondly,we should know that only in the way of down to the earth can we improve ourselves step by step.Therefore,instead of pay too much attention to name or title,we should spent times in how to promte ourselves by making practical effort.

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