- 分享到:
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；作者句法知识扎实，但从句稍微偏少；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
"A dream of Red Mansions" is a Chinese, for the world to have great impact on the novel, the author Cao Xueqin is a novelist in the Qing dynasty. With Jia Baoyu, Lin Daiyu's love tragedy as the main line, from the performance of the rise and fall of the Jia, history, king, the Xue Sida family, reveals the feudal society gradually collapse of the insider, reflects the people of personality liberation and equality of human rights requirements. Jia Baoyu, "a dream of Red Mansions" a central figure of provide for oneself and live comfortably, he wants to remain free, free life, look down the imperial examination and the pursuit of fame and fortune. He fell in love with the same rebellious Lin Daiyu, doomed tragedy.
