作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;有效的运用了一些复杂句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling Listening,speaking and writing is a frequent way that be used by most of learning English people.But nowadays more and more students don't pay attention to spell the letter.There are have some reasons in below.First of all,I think the reason is our students don't form the good habit as he or she was a child.It's dificult to give up this bad habit when he or she grow up.The second reason ,when he or she has study at school,the teachers don't ask them strict,so themselves have pay too much attention ,too.The last reason,I think the parents don't have pay too much attention.In order or change this situation,I suggest our teachers and parents and ourselves all pay attention to spelling no matter at home or in school.