Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;很好的运用了从句,但部分句子稍有瑕疵;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Judging from Bureau of Labor Statistics,the result of the Current Population Survey. It is obvious that people having got poor education is likely to make less money weekly and is higher in unemployment rate than those of people with high degree in 2011. However,look into the statistics in detail,though the unemployment rate of people having the less than high school diploma,which is the minimum degree,was lower than any other people as well as they gained the minimum amount of income.On the contrary people who have acquired professional degree could be most likely to get employed,and they will get the highest salary while they did not achieve the highest degree. In my opinion, getting well educated could brings us a bright future but we do not have to obtain master's degree or higher degrees,which only could help us get a bit better income.