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2005年专业四级英语作文真题:我对艺术节的看法

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:25浏览次数:3246
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题目 My idea of a university arts festival
说明 The students' Union of your university is planning to hold an arts festival next semester, and they are inviting students to contribute their ideas and suggestions as to how it should be organized or what should be included.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达丰富度要提升,可是单词拼写错误稍多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用;请注意分段。

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Our Students'Union is plaining to hold an arts festival next semester.For the purpose of holding it more sucessful,inviting the students to give some ideas and suggestion is of great improtance.As far as I concern,the festival should give more opputunitise to students to sing,dance,or draw. Obviously,students couldn't be given more stages to display their talent.To be shy is one of the reason that they are afriad of proforming on the stage.

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