小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

My good friend named Ping,She is a beautiful girl with long hair,clear eyes.I have making friends with her for twenty-three years.We come from the same place. She was my classmate from primary to senior,We was separated untill we went to high school! Nobody can instead of her that who given me so much mermories and happiness in my childhood. I knew her when I went to the school the first day, She was assigned to be our minitor because she studied very hard and very smart!