小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

My good friend named Ping,She is a beautiful girl with long hair,clear eyes.I have making friends with her for twenty-three years.We come from the same place. She was my classmate from primary school to senior school,We was separated until we went to high school! Nobody can instead of her that who given me so much mermories and happiness in my childhood. I knew her when I went to the school the first day, She was assigned to be our minitor because she studied very hard and very smart!