小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

My good friend named Ping,Nobody can instead of her that who given me so much mermories and happiness in my childhood. She was a beautiful girl with long hair,clear eyes.I have making friends with her for twenty-three years.We come from the same place. She was my classmate from primary school to middle school,We was separated until we went to high school! I knew her when I went to the school the first day, She was assigned to be our minitor because she studied very hard and very smart!